The Adams School  
P.O. Box 29
27 School Street
Castine, Maine 04421
326-8608
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ADAMS SCHOOL NEWSLETTER
FEBRUARY 1, 2008
 

Writing Rules

We all start somewhere,” says Maine author, Cynthia Lord, “and somewhere not very good.” She was explaining to our students about first drafts—particularly excruciating for writers, since they must begin with a page that is inevitably blank, hard, and disappointing. Her advice was simple, for ending up somewhere good with subsequent drafts: “Read, write, learn, dream.” She added a more tactical set of rules: “Dare to be bad,” and “Just get it done.”

All of our 5-8th graders have read her book, Rules—a 2006 Newbery Award honor book, and Schneider Family award winner—but they hadn’t read the first sentence of her first draft until she shared it last Friday: “At our house, we have a rule.” It didn’t survive as the first sentence of the published version, six years later. Evidently, getting it done can take a while and involve a lot of changes.

Lord was exploring her writing process last Friday with an audience of 5-8th graders from Union 93 schools, the keynote address for Project Acceptance at Blue Hill Consolidated School. In addition to tips on writing, the day involved small group meetings designed to develop awareness and tolerance for people with disabilities. Lord’s book is about a middle school girl who has a younger brother with autism.

            To end up with a Newbery Award book, you have to endure a lot of editor comments, proofreader marks and corrections, multiple galley versions, and lots of suggestions from other people about everything from the right title to the cover for your book! In the first letter from her editor, Lord was greeted with eight pages of things to work on. “Just get it done,” indeed. 

Writing is “a struggle” that seems to have started in second grade when her teacher wrote on her report card, “Cynthia would rather stare out the window than get her work done.” But she was getting her work done—she was dreaming! “Our dreams,” says Lord, “show what’s important to write about.”

The story in Rules started taking shape when Lord’s daughter asked, “How come I never see families like mine in books or on TV?” What she meant was, why weren’t there books written from the perspective of a girl with a younger brother like hers.

Lord sited the age-old writing maxim: Write what you know. In her case, this meant autism, Bath, Maine, and scenes and events from a childhood living on a pond in rural New Hampshire. Elliott’s Antiques in her book is actually Cornerstone Antiques in Bath, but she moved it upstairs to create a lesson on limited access: Jason, Catherine’s wheelchair-bound friend, can’t join her on a visit to her favorite store. Physical limitations are also explored in a scene set in the parking lot of the occupational therapy clinic where Catherine meets Jason. “Pushing someone in a wheelchair changes your gaze to street level,” says Lord, so to write effectively about Catherine pushing Jason, Lord explored a familiar parking lot in Brunswick and discovered unfamiliar challenges.

            “Find surprises,” she advised our writers, “because they become gold in description.” She learned that sand, awkwardly placed ramps, and people blocking the way could become difficult elements for Jason’s travel and access in the book. She also learned that sensory details aren’t always the obvious ones. The smell of fish at the adjacent park, for instance, dominated her first impressions more than the traditional harbor sights.                                     

And the publishing finish line can also be deceptive. Just when you think you’re done, an editor asks for two more chapters…in the middle of the book. Catherine’s dad needed to be filled out as a character. So Lord had to go back and insert two scenes earlier in the story. This gave readers the tomato gardening and playing catch scenes. 

            When it came time for title and cover art, Lord lucked out. Her own title stuck, eventually, and the proposed photo of the dollhouse family in a fish tank lost out to the simple floating rubber ducky being inspected from below by a goldfish.

Our kids had questions. Do you have a fish tank? Where did you get the idea for the moving van? (“It’s something I saw at age ten.”) Is there a sequel in the works? Is Catherine based on you? What is Jason’s disability—it isn’t specified in the book? Where did you get the idea for the raft scene? How do disabled kids react to Rules? Was Kristi intended to be a mean girl? How does it feel to be an author—to see your book on a shelf?

“Great!” says Lord, though it still feels odd for her to see her own books in Borders and not feel possessive.

            “The best part of being an author,” says Lord, “is seeing people read my book, and getting their mail and cards.” To meet her readers, she travels far and wide— from London to Blue Hill. And the duck on the cover has become an iconic gift from her fans.

 —Todd

 Coastal League Basketball Tournament Time! The A tournament will be played next week. Our games are as follows:

Boys:

Wednesday:   Basketball play home game at 4:00.

If they win, they play Thursday (3:00pm or 6:00 TBA) and Saturday (10:30 or 1:30 TBA)—both at GSA.

 

Girls:

Play Tuesday at Brooksville (4:00). If they win, they’ll play at 4:30 or 7:30 on Thursday, and Saturday at 9:00 or 12:00—both at GSA. Awards ceremony is at 3pm.  

Rink Time: The ice is fantastic! While the weather holds, we’re skating during lunch recess—not before school—on our playground rink. There is no rink supervision after school, but families are welcome to use it at their own risk…with adult supervision.  Don’t forget to “Reverse Direction” every 2 minutes. Got any extra or outgrown skates? Send ‘em in!

Reader’s Theater: Next week, Readers Theater will perform their Chinese New Year Extravaganza (complete with dragon) at 4pm on Wednesday at the Abbott School. On Thursday morning, right after morning meeting, the whole school will walk over for an encore performance.                                                                                                              

Parent-Teacher conferences are on Friday, February 15th. Call for an appointment, 326-8608. 

Phone traffic at school: A little advanced preparation and planning would help ease the daily phone traffic in the school office. Plans change; calls are unavoidable on many occasions. But notes to teachers and advance planning would ease things for Mrs. Thomas.

Yearbook Ads… How about a “well-wisher” ad for a graduate or athlete or friend? Deadline for ads: 2/29. Same price as last year: $25.00 per quarter page. Help keep the yearbook free of charge for students, and high quality printing and binding.  

Save the Dates…for French Trip Dinners! February 12 (Winter Stew!), March 13 (French menu prepared by Tom Gutow…Trinitarian church, RSVP. Entertainment by Ellacapella).

                                                                                                                

Adams School Menu  Feb. 4th  - 8th

Monday – Cheesy Chicken Pasta Bake, Italian Bread, Carrots, Mandarin Oranges, Milk

Tuesday – Pancakes, Bacon, Yogurt, Juice Milk

Weds. – Chicken Nuggets, Mashed Potato, Yeast Roll, Corn, Pineapple Upside-down Cake, Milk

Thursday – Pizza, Salad, Goldfish, Apple Crisp, Milk

Friday – Grilled Ham & Cheese Sandwich, Chips, Baby Carrots, Juice, Cookie, Milk

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February

 

12   French Trip fund raising dinner: Winter Stews! Emerson Hall, 6:00pm.

15   Teacher inservice: P-T Conferences (call for an appointment, 326-8608)

18-24   Winter Vacation

26   Hancock County Spelling Bee, Bucksport Middle School, 6:30pm.

29   All-state Jazz Competition at MDI....7-8th graders go for middle school comp.

 

March

 

13   French Trip fund raising dinner: Special menu by Tom Gutow. Trinitarian Church, 6:00pm. RSVP.

14   Second Trimester Ends/ Smorg Day II

28   Union 93 inservice day